This is my poem using onomatopoea.
SWIMMING
We went to the pool
and it was cool
The studens jumped
into the pool.
Splash, splash, splash
We kicked with our boards
Kick,kick,kick
We did breastroke froggy
kick,glid, breath.
Froggy -kick, glide, breath.
Brish, hah!, Brish, hah!,
After we jumped out we got our towels
And dried ourselves
Drip, drip, drip, drip
Then we lined up and got on the bus
Thud, thud, thud
And rode all the way back to school.
Everyone said that was fun.
2 comments:
Hullo Jade! I like the way your poem flowed. Good work!
Hi, Jade
I love your Onomatopoiea poem about swimming. You are a very good swimmer and keep working hard.
From Georgia.
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