Friends
Friend are like flowers.
Petals break if you are mean.
Care for your best friends.
Thursday, November 13, 2008
My Haiku poems
We have been learning about haiku poems. On the first line there has to be 5 syllables, on the second line there has to be 7 syllables and on the third line there has to be 5 syllables. Haiku poems are from Japan.
Friends
Friend are like flowers.
Petals break if you are mean.
Care for your best friends.
Friends
Friend are like flowers.
Petals break if you are mean.
Care for your best friends.
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The second haiku of yours is a very meaningful and rhyming one. This is a very good combination and requires a lot of talent to arrive at. Normally what we see are rhyming poems without much of deep meaning as much as poems with deep meaning but without rhyme. You have combined both. Great job. Hats off!
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